Name That Synopsis
Wednesday, 27 January 2010 17:30

Are you working on the Great American Novel (or great global one)?  If so, can you summarize the plot in a sentence or two?  If not, you may lose your way somewhere along the line (says the guy who loses his way most of the time).  Having a detailed outline is great, but can you boil it down?  Which brings me to Name That Synopsis.  Can you name some of the following titles by their boiled-down synopsis?  (What’s the plural of synopsis?)

1. A sixteen year old boy’s first year at a private school includes good friends and great pranks, but is defined by the search for answers about life and death after a fatal car crash.

2. As further evidence of his family’s bad fortune which they attribute to a curse on a distant relative, a boy is sent to a hellish correctional camp in the desert where he finds his first real friend, a treasure, and a new sense of himself.

3. Main character is a normal boy, except that he has been raised by ghosts and other denizens of the graveyard.

4. The life and times of a boy who would not grow up.

5. A boy helps a runaway slave and has many adventures as they sail down the Mississippi.

6. Twelve year old boy moves to a prison island and has to contend with his extraordinary new environment in addition to life with his autistic sister.

7. A grumpy individual tries to stop Christmas from coming to a nearby town.

8. A husband and wife (both dogs) attempt to rescue their fifteen puppies from the clutches of an evil woman.


 
Revision 101
Friday, 22 January 2010 07:59

I've mentioned before that I have a young adult novel, His Boy Elroy, coming out in the fall.  The latest news is that the marketing staff at Holt wants to change the title to The Second Base Club.  I must admit I have a little twinge of sadness to lose my title, but their argument is that today's teen won't relate to the reference to a 60s cartoon.  I agree with them...The Second Base Club it is.

I few days ago I received the layout of the novel, and as I read through the pages, I'm not only seeing various little typos that need to be changed, but there are also a few areas where I feel like I'm holding back, areas that might need a bigger tweak to pack the necessary emotional punch.  I'm going to experiment with writing freehand, which is not my usual way.  Maybe this will force me to dig deeper.  We'll see.

So here's my question.  Do you write directly into your computer, or do you write with a pen or pencil first?  Serious revisers want to know...Greg

 

 
Google Alerts
Wednesday, 20 January 2010 12:44

Recently I spent time at the Santa Barbara Mission at the Cyber Book Promotion Retreat.  The event hosted some of the current gurus of social networking, Harold Underdown, Greg Pincus (otherwise known as the other Greg, Anastasia Suen, and famed blogger Lisa Yee.  One of the things that developed over the weekend was that we were encouraged to find the one thing we'd take away—whether it was Twitter, Facebook, blogging, etc.  Find one thing that appeals to us and jump in.

Here's my one thing...Google Alerts.  Many of us have Google Alerts set up on our names and book titles, but it also makes sense to use them in other areas of interest...in my case, YA and middle grade novels or humorous kids' book.  Find not only where people are talking about us and become a part of those conversations, but join in other conversations that are related.  Great stuff.

By the way, if you're ever in the area, the Santa Barbara Mission is a must see.  Built in 1886, it can house hundreds of people (folks in the know call them retreatents).  I'd like to make a private retreat there some day, both for spiritual and creative writing renewal...Greg

 
Newbery Medal Announced!
Monday, 18 January 2010 09:09

Yes, ladies and gentlemen, the ALA awards have been announced.  I don't know about you, but I have lots to read in the coming months...and it looks like my publisher, Henry Holt and Company, is fairly well represented.  Check out the list below and then hit the book store.  I'll see you there...Greg.

John Newbery Medal for most outstanding contribution to children’s literature
“When You Reach Me,” written by Rebecca Stead, is the 2010 Newbery Medal winner. The book is published by Wendy Lamb Books, an imprint of Random House Children’s Books.

Four Newbery Honor Books also were named: “Claudette Colvin: Twice Toward Justice” by Phillip Hoose and published by Melanie Kroupa Books/Farrar Straus Giroux, an imprint of Macmillan Children’s Publishing Group; “The Evolution of Calpurnia Tate” by Jacqueline Kelly and published by Henry Holt and Company; “Where the Mountain Meets the Moon” by Grace Lin and published by Little, Brown and Company Books for Young Readers; and “The Mostly True Adventures of Homer P. Figg” by Rodman Philbrick and published by The Blue Sky Press, An Imprint of Scholastic Inc.

Randolph Caldecott Medal for most distinguished American picture book for children
“The Lion & the Mouse,” illustrated and written by Jerry Pinkney, is the 2010 Caldecott Medal winner. The book was published by Little, Brown and Company Books for Young Readers.

Two Caldecott Honor Books also were named: “All the World,” illustrated by Marla Frazee, written by Liz Garton Scanlon and published by Beach Lane Books; and “Red Sings from Treetops: A Year in Colors,” illustrated by Pamela Zagarenski, written by Joyce Sidman and published by Houghton Mifflin Books for Children, Houghton Mifflin Harcourt.

Michael L. Printz Award for excellence in literature written for young adults
“Going Bovine,” written by Libba Bray, is the 2010 Printz Award winner. The book is published by Delacorte Press, an imprint of Random House Children’s Books, a division of Random House.

Four Printz Honor Books also were named: “Charles and Emma: The Darwins’ Leap of Faith” by Deborah Heiligman, published by Henry Holt Books for Young Readers, an imprint of Macmillan Children’s Publishing Group; “The Monstrumologist” by Rick Yancey, published by Simon & Schuster Books for Young Readers, an imprint of Simon & Schuster Children’s Publishing Group; “Punkzilla” by Adam Rapp, published by Candlewick Press; and “Tales of the Madman Underground: An Historical Romance, 1973” by John Barnes, published by Viking Children’s Books, a division of Penguin Young Readers Group.

 
Writing Contests
Tuesday, 29 December 2009 09:08

A few months back I mentioned that I was working on two stories simultaneously, hoping one would emerge as the book I should work on.  I did this for several weeks but had no real passion for either story, and I was eventually at the point of tossing both of them in the trash.  Then, this past October, I entered one of the stories (ten pages and a synopsis) in the middle grade category at an SCBWI (got Google?) conference and won first prize in that genre.  Winning the award brought back the passion.  The story is now complete and in the hands of my agent.

Perhaps this is what entering writing contests are all about.  If nothing else, they give the winners the passion and confidence in their projects to press on.  By the way, the last time I won an SCBWI award, it was for an young adult novel called His Boy Elroy, which is coming out in the fall of 2010.  I'm hoping for the same success for the current winner...Greg.

 
Politically Correct 12 Days of Christmas
Saturday, 26 December 2009 10:57

This just in from alert reader Juanita Trine from her Good Clean Funnies List.  I'm not sure who the originator is, but this is pretty hilarious.  Enjoy...Greg

On the 12th day of the Eurocentrically imposed midwinter

festival, my significant other in a consenting adult,

monogamous relationship gave to me:

TWELVE males reclaiming their inner warrior through ritual
drumming,

ELEVEN pipers piping (plus the 18-member pit orchestra made
up of members in good standing of the Musicians Equity Union
as called for in their union contract even though they will
not be asked to play a note),

TEN melanin-deprived testosterone-poisoned scions of the
patriarchal ruling class system leaping,

NINE persons engaged in rhythmic self-expression,

EIGHT economically disadvantaged female persons stealing
milk-products from enslaved Bovine-Americans,

SEVEN endangered swans swimming on federally protected
wetlands,

SIX enslaved Fowl-Americans producing stolen non-human
animal products,

FIVE golden symbols of culturally sanctioned enforced
domestic incarceration,

(NOTE: after members of the Animal Liberation Front
threatened to throw red paint at my computer, the calling
birds, French hens, and partridge have been reintroduced to
their native habitat. To avoid further Animal-American
enslavement, the remaining gift package has been revised.)

FOUR hours of recorded whale songs,

THREE deconstructionist poets,

TWO Sierra Club calendars printed on recycled processed tree
carcasses, and

ONE Spotted Owl activist chained to an old-growth pear tree.

Merry Christmas.
Happy Chanukah/Hanukkah.
Good Kwanzaa.
Blessed Yule.
Oh, heck! Happy Holidays!!!! (unless otherwise prohibited by
law)

Unless, of course, you are suffering from Seasonally
Affected Disorder (SAD). If this be the case, please
substitute this gratuitous call for celebration with a
suggestion that you have a thoroughly adequate day.

 
Paris Pan Takes the Dare
Thursday, 11 June 2009 06:27

The news of the day (can you hear the fireworks?) is that Cynthea's Liu's latest book, Paris Pan Takes the Dare, is officially launched today.  I've met Cynthea several times over the years at various writing events.  She's a great writer, not to mention a darn good dancer.  Check out her groovy site, and take the dare...if you dare.  Greg

 

 
Book Launch - The Brotherhood of the Traveling Underpants
Sunday, 31 May 2009 10:40

With the demise of Adventures for Kids, Ventura's only children's book store, what's a body to do in order to launch a book?  Answer: launch it at a school!

On Tuesday of this week I'm planning to do just that.  Melvin Beederman's seventh adventure will be officially debuted at Mound Elementary School in Ventura, California.  In return for a free day with the author, I'll be selling book seven in the series at Mound.  Of course, all the books will be available, but what a great way to introduce the most recent one to hundreds of kids—way more than would ever show up to a book store signing.  This may be the way of the future.  I'll let you know how it goes.

As I've probably blogged about in the past, the highlight of my school presentation is when I get the kids up to act out one of the books, and I start things off with an evil laugh contest.  The winner gets to play the villain as we act out The Grateful Fred.

 
Battle of the Books - Santa Barbara
Wednesday, 22 April 2009 20:13
Tomorrow I'm heading to Santa Barbara for Battle of the Books.  I'm not sure what this is, but it sounds like some kind of cage fight.  You know, where they invite an author, lock him in a cage with a bunch of third grader to battle it out with books.  Not to worry—I'm bringing along a view volumes of the Encyclopedia Britannica.  "Take that, short people!"  Whap!  That's the plan anyway.  Or maybe I'll bring along Harry Potter #5, in  hardcover.  I hope those third graders come prepared for battle.  I'll let you know how it goes.  Greg
 
I'm a Writer With A.D.D.
Sunday, 19 April 2009 18:08

I'm trying an experiment in writing.  I have two ideas for books.  What if I alternate each day, working on one book, then the other?  When I finish I'll submit both to my agent and she can decide which one to market.  I know...sounds like I have a bad case of writing A.D.D.

Anyway, that's the plan.  Write two books at the same time and see what happens.  It may be that one will emerge as my favorite, in which case I'll drop the other and finish the one that gets me the most excited.  No rules here...just experimenting with the writing process.  I'll let you know how it works out.  Greg

 
What's on Page Ninety Seven?
Tuesday, 14 April 2009 07:57

Hello, world.  Today is What's on Page Ninety Seven day.  Haven't you ever wondered what's on page 97 of certain books...or am I the only one who thinks that way?  Well, read on, my friend.

"If Uncle Bill is allergic to cats maybe he won't be able to visit us anymore."  Hate That Cat by Sharon Creech.

"Made me want to curl up on the floor and roll away."  Chicken Boy by Frances O'Roark Dowell.

"Squeak," Hugo said.  The Attack of the Valley Girls by Greg Trine.

"Kiriel, you are trespassing in direct contravention of the Creator's wishes."  Repossessed by A. M. Jenkins.

"I've never even seen the movie, so for me, it was like walking into a freak show."  Diary of a Wimpy Kid by Jeff Kinney.

"Not bad for a kid who had never seen Sesame Street."  Holes by Louis Sachar.

"There warn't no frivolishness about him, not a bit, and he warn't ever loud."  The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn by Mark Twain.

"Hello, you cakesniffers," she said.  The Austere Academy by Lemony Snicket.

"That snotnose."  Death of a Salesman by Arthur Miller.

 

 
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Name: Greg Trine

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Favorite Quote: Have you saved the world lately? – Melvin Beederman

Favorite Reads: Bloody Jack series,

Favorite Movies: Shawshank Redemption, Back to the Future, Princess Bride, It’s a Wonderful Life,